When we were ready, Elgrego began his magic by making birds appear. My favourite part was when he put three birds in a box and then he put a blanket on the box and said, "It better work," two times, then he lifted the blanket up. The birds were gone. All there was in the box was a rabbit. The next bird trick was when he had a pot and he lit the pot on fire, then he closed the lid, then he opened it, then there was a bird. I was amazed.
Next, Elgrego performed a magic trick with fizzy drink which was a raspberry drink. He had a box which was called an ups and down box. He put fizzy drink in a cup and he put it in the ups and down box, then he turned it upside down and the right way, then he opened it. It wasn't split, so he took the drink out and drank it. We were all happy so we clapped because it was a good trick.
After the drink trick, we watched Elgrego talk with Seemore, the baby green dinosaur. Seemore was sad because people at school were picking on him because he was green, then Elgrego talked to him about using his wits, then he sang The Rainbow Song from The Muppets, then he went back into his egg.
Nice one, Jahnyva. I liked everything in your story and it gave me pictures in my head. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Jahnyva. You have begun each paragraph with the main idea of the paragraph - a sentence telling what the paragraph is about.
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